tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2145398515549215902.post2367929398403237812..comments2013-02-18T15:33:24.346-08:00Comments on Marisa Cappetta BA Vis Arts and Poet: Stubborn as StoneMarisahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09556341632433581809noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2145398515549215902.post-66661201325878675382011-09-14T06:56:30.560-07:002011-09-14T06:56:30.560-07:00Hi Marisa, shouldnt you have a comma after "e...Hi Marisa, shouldnt you have a comma after "earth" in the penultimate line? Somehow the scansion doesn't jibe with the rest of the poem. Maybe "phoshorescent" is too long a word.henry de graafhttp://facebook.comnoreply@blogger.com