tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2145398515549215902.post2960833443253614453..comments2013-02-18T15:33:24.346-08:00Comments on Marisa Cappetta BA Vis Arts and Poet: 8 April 2010Marisahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09556341632433581809noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2145398515549215902.post-68322117144541111472010-04-08T12:25:00.642-07:002010-04-08T12:25:00.642-07:00Thanks Francis. It needs a bit of tweaking, I'...Thanks Francis. It needs a bit of tweaking, I'll be coming back and editing here and there.Marisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09556341632433581809noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2145398515549215902.post-36937810857095862422010-04-08T12:22:54.708-07:002010-04-08T12:22:54.708-07:00Must be the bull dust, Miriam :)Must be the bull dust, Miriam :)Marisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09556341632433581809noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2145398515549215902.post-7159861575459449892010-04-08T12:15:16.587-07:002010-04-08T12:15:16.587-07:00You always remind me of Kenneth Slessor. Wonderful...You always remind me of Kenneth Slessor. Wonderful.Mariam Kobrashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03490156509781232762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2145398515549215902.post-87575371280493126492010-04-08T12:08:40.588-07:002010-04-08T12:08:40.588-07:00I love the sustained metaphor, and the passion beh...I love the sustained metaphor, and the passion behind it.Francis Scudellarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01008685302028451297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2145398515549215902.post-43179208372582214922010-04-08T11:50:29.739-07:002010-04-08T11:50:29.739-07:00Greg, I love that word, glassine. Been wanting to ...Greg, I love that word, glassine. Been wanting to use it for a while.<br /><br />Thanks Gerry, that's kind. There's a problem with the rhythm in 'The brine soaked ropes that bind her<br />burn off and brand her with his devotion.' That I need to fix. Too tired last night, I'll have to come back to it.Marisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09556341632433581809noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2145398515549215902.post-87469726894922962332010-04-08T07:21:08.050-07:002010-04-08T07:21:08.050-07:00great job. sonnets are hard, but you nailed this. ...great job. sonnets are hard, but you nailed this. bravo!gerry boydhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08404762839765626232noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2145398515549215902.post-15768668024369145992010-04-08T03:54:20.780-07:002010-04-08T03:54:20.780-07:00"and fume the sky with lines of glassine vers..."and fume the sky with lines of glassine verse": so well spouted. Bravo again. =)Greg O'Connell Poet in Schoolshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14758452879366685371noreply@blogger.com